After several weeks of debate, I decided to write about my sister with Down Syndrome and the first day of Special Olympics. I wrote up a first draft and would like to see what you guys think. I’m not going to lie, it was somewhat of a challenge. I’m not quite sure exactly how to discribe her and the experience , while keeping it personal. There is also the fact that I have to keep it under 650 words. My sister has impacted me more than words can be fit on thousands of pages. Nonetheless, I’m very open to suggestions and I’ll rewrite the whole thing if nessicary. Thanks!
ill read it!
i’ll read it 
Thanks guys/girls. I’ll send it after I get off of work. Fair warning though. It’s a first draft and I’ve never had any help/guidance on it; nor have I read many personal statements before. Don’t expect a perfectly written one. Feel free to tear it up as much as possible. I won’t get mad; I promise 
I’ll read it as well! Pm to me!
I’ll read it - PM me!
I would love to read it, PM me.
I’ll read it! Pm me.
I’ll read it!