Can someone read my personal statement essay?

<p>Can't believe I'm doing this, but I'm sort of desperate haha
It's my Commonapp for ivies, and I'm not sure how I feel about it.
Comment here and I'll PM it to you? Thank you soo much :)</p>

<p>No takers? I’ll send it immediately, promise! Haha</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>Me! Send it over.</p>

<p>PM me, do you think you could read one of my supplements?</p>

<p>Aw man I already sent it in haha I’m not sure if I want you guys to tear it apart now… I might freak out if y’all say its bad…</p>