Can someone read my personal statement?

Applying to College
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<p>Hello,
I've just finished drafts of my Personal Statement and Short Answer for the Common App, and was wondering if a few people would be willing to critique them. Topics are chess and public speaking.</p>

<p>Post here or PM if you have time to read them, it would be much appreciated.</p>

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<p>I would!
10char</p>

3

<p>i would like to!</p>

4

<p>I am willing to read.</p>