Can someone read my UMich essay?

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<p>Please!!! I need help!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you take a look at my post and leave me some feedback :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if you can read my common app essay </p>

<p>pm me</p>

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<p>PM me and i will critique your essay</p>

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<p>PM it over</p>