Can someone read my Why Brown essay?

<p>Would anyone be willing to read my “How did you find out about Brown” statement? I know it’s probably not that important, but I’m not sure if what I have right now is funny or a little too risky.
If anyone who is not applying/has already applied would PM me, that would be awesome.
Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>Sure, send it to me ! :)</p>

<p>Sure. I can give some suggestions. =)</p>

<p>sure pm me. I already applied ED</p>

<p>NO! Do not send it out. Talk to an english teacher at your school or your parents, but do not give it out online.</p>

<p>Oh yeah actually Pawn is right... Cause I've already sent in my Brown app last month (ED), but someone who hasnt could easily pretend like they have and then get ideas or something from yours....</p>

<p>The above posters are right. Do check if the people asking for your essay are applying to Brown or not. Do send me over your essay though, I am not applying to Brown.</p>

<p>I'll read your essay and share some input!</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>Yeah, actually I really don't understand people who find others ONLINE to read their essays. You guys say "no class of '09" or "not to people who are applying to Brown" but either way, how will you guys know for sure?</p>

<p>For some really smart people, you guys sure don't realize that others can easily take your essay....</p>

<p>I've read many essays before, and I will gladly critique yours if you want.</p>

<p>i'll check it out send it over.</p>

<p>email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>not applying to brown.</p>

<p>sure, PM me. i'm 09, but i'm not applying to brown.</p>

<p>ill check it out</p>

<p>I'll read it over if you want, I've edited quite a few over the past couple of months. Feel free to PM me. :)</p>

<p>Yea I'll read it..</p>

<p>i'll read it please. i'm not applying to brown, but i am 09 and applying to my state schools, and don't really know how to start my "why" essay. i am a pretty good write tho, so i'll PM you back comments</p>

<p>i can, but i dont know who you want to read</p>

<p>sure :)~~</p>