Can someone read my Why Columbia essay please? :)

College Essays
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<p>It's literally 597 characters, so not too long. But it would help me TREMENDOUSLY if you could let me know what I can do for improvement!
My problem with it is that it's too general and does not apply to Columbia but yeahhhhh, please be harsh </p>

<p>Oh, and thank you :)</p>

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<p>Will read and critique! Send it in a PM</p>

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<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>Anyone else? :D</p>

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<p>send it in a pm ;)</p>

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<p>Thanks! I just sent it</p>

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<p>Yeah, I’d love to read it too!! I’m pretty good at critiquing essays.</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>I could read and give you advice on it. You can just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>yeah, pm me, i’ll give constructive feedback.</p>

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<p>I can. I’ll be brutally honest.</p>

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<p>I can too.</p>

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<p>will read, wrote mine already so i have good experience :]</p>

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<p>Thanks so much everyone! I just sent it :)</p>