Can someone read over my essay?

<p>Hey guys, I wrote my essay for university like two month ago. There was no specific prompt. But please be honest and brutal if necassary. I am not confident in my essay myself, and I am considering rewrite it, but one of my family friend who's a retired english teacher said it was good enough. So i want to hear your guys opinion.</p>

<p>P.S. How do i send my essays to you, via email or what?</p>

<p>i'll try and look over it....just send via CC's private messaging</p>

<p>I'll read it. Copy and paste it onto the CC private messaging thing.
However, due to time diff, I can't promise it'll get back to you soon.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>I'll read it, sure.</p>

<p>Bump More People Wanna Read?</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>ok i will read it</p>

<p>all right... i'll read it</p>

<p>i'll comment. PM please</p>

<p>if you still need it, I'll read your essay, just pm</p>

<p>ill read pm me</p>