<p>Hi to anyone reading this, I just finished supplement one for the University of Michigan and was wondering if anyone could give it a read and give me some criticism on it! It would be much appreciated. It's about 300 words (I couldn't fit it all into 250) and I'm hoping that will be okay. PM me and I'll send you the essay! Again, thank you so much!</p>
<p>Prompt:
Essay #1 (Required for all applicants. Approximately 250 words.)
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.</p>
thanks!</p>