Can Someone Review My Personal Statement Before I Submit It??

I’m about to graduate high school and need some help figuring out if my personal statement will get me anywhere. I’ll appreciate any advice or fixes people throw at me.

IMO your best bet it to ask a trusted English teacher to review it. If you do send it to someone on CC be sure it is a seasoned adult poster.

@SinfulVisions , I don’t mind taking a look if you like. Sometimes it helps to have an objective perspective.