Can someone revise my UC berkeley transfer essays? I'll revise yours (please read)

College Essays
1

<p>Guys, I really need to transfer to another school. It would honestly mean the world to me if you help me revise my two essays that I finished. I will definitely revise yours, and, really, I like to think I'm a good editer for other people's essay.</p>

<p>Please pm me, and maybe we can revise together.</p>

<p>Transferring is very important to me, and I'll appreciate ALL help. thanks alot guys.</p>

2

<p>I really need a few more people. Any help is GOOD help. Any else wants to help me revise.</p>

3

<p>I would love to read you essays :slight_smile: just PM me ! and could you read mine too?</p>