Can someone tell me how is my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm an international applicant applying to Harvard,Yale,Brown,Cornell,Penn,Dartmouth. Can someone tell me how is my essay? I'll post it on private</p>

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<p>Message me,I am applying 2 the same colleges except Yale so plz chance my essay 2 in return,</p>

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<p>I Have sent you the essay on private but i’m not sure if you got it. Let me know.</p>

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<p>Hey, you can PM me your essay, and I’ll PM you mine. Let’s help each other out ;)</p>

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<p>Not doing RD!
PM me :)</p>

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<p>I’d like to have a read, and i will reply</p>