Can somone please edit my esssay for admission!!!!

[ghostfacekiller]

<p>bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>

[tony1990us]

<p>ill take a look! pm me</p>

[wellesleyhopeful]

<p>Yah Por Supuesto PM me</p>

[blondie625]

<p>Ye-yeah... pm me..</p>

[whiteee]

<p>Just PM me the essay and I'll critique it.</p>

[gery_sun]

<p>I can take a look at it. pm me :)</p>

[lmicheellee]

<p>pm me too! i'll read it.</p>

[eriniggy]

<p>Yeah I'll read it. PM me.</p>

[kollegkid]

<p>PM me if you don't mind honest criticism.</p>

[avantgarden]

<p>PM me, I will give an honest critique. :]</p>

[yixingdsy]

<p>pm me, i could give you some advises</p>

[twardy24]

<p>PM ME too...</p>

[dude9213]

<p>pm me if you'd like</p>