<p>sorry, i am a non native, and i wrote this as a last sentence in one of my essays: </p>
<p>this fact, however, has only deepened my wish to learn more, to become a part of this unique community, dedicating my studies to the dignified, beautiful neo-gothic buildings of the University.</p>
<p>can you say that?? i remember the greek-english princeton student who helped me editing my essays saying that she was doubtful about this one, but then she never mentioned it again?? did she forget it? please help, i am about to go to the post office and mail it!!!</p>
<p>Are you planning on becoming an architect?</p>
<p>As long as you plan to study the architectural structures of these buildings - i.e. like to become an architect, it seems fine with me? You should make this clearer though - as for now its pretty vaguely worded. I seems like you don’t actually try to talk about these buildings, but try to say something deep about the foundations of Princeton. For me, at least.</p>
<p>yup, that was the reason… i mean like you, guilty bystander put it. i wanted to tell them that, if i became a part of the princeton community, i will thank them through my studies…
is this weird??</p>
<p>oh, yh and i don´t really wanna become an architect. i am more into humanities ^^</p>
<p>austriangirl: I mean, it’s not particularly weird. There are definitely several freshman seminars here devoted to learning about Princeton.</p>