Can you comment on my essay please?

Applying to College
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<p>finally done with part of the headache!
I'll pm u if u want to comment on it.
criticisms welcome, and please help me check if I have made any grammar errors since English is not my native language!
Any comments would be much appreciated, thanks!</p>

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<p>Hi, I'll help you critique ur essay.just PM me.</p>

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<p>bump...any more please?</p>

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<p>I'll look at it</p>

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<p>Comment I shall.</p>

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<p>thanks guys, more would be appreciated!</p>

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<p>hey just PM me and i will comment on it.</p>

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<p>PM it here;)</p>

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<p>ill look at it</p>

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<p>i'll be glad to take a look</p>

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<p>i'll comment on it</p>

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<p>hey,pm me alright...I'll try my very best to help you</p>

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<p>PM me and i'll read it.</p>

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<p>Pm me please</p>

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<p>PM and I'll be glad to help</p>

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<p>PM me.. ill read it</p>