Can you critique my UC essay?

College Essays
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<p>Please do... need to know if it's up to par. Thank you.</p>

2

<p>Sure, send a PM.</p>

3

<p>I can. PM me :)</p>

4

<p>I would be happy to.</p>

5

<p>I can take a look. PM me.</p>

6

<p>Sure I will help out but tell me what the prompt is. And make sure you have a catchy starting.</p>

7

<p>hey ill be glad to help yah out. just be sure to tell me what it is ur writing about first.
send it over =)</p>

8

<p>Sure. You can email me at <a href="mailto:sangars6@gmail.com">sangars6@gmail.com</a></p>