<p>Does anyone want to read and critique my essay? It's still very rough. I am applying to the ivies as well as some other tier one schools and I want to make it the best I can. I have looked at many example essays, and none are even close to mine... I don't know if that's a good sign.</p>
<p>I would prefer no one applying to college this year.</p>
<p>I am going to be a junior (11’er). PM me I will be glad to take a look and critique it.</p>
<p>Got a lot of time in my hands, I have been doing an internship and I am in college. Just finished up critiquing last few essays. I will be going to my internship tomorrow so just PM me I will critique, make sure to include the prompt.</p>
<p>Have you compared it to those in books with successful essays?</p>
<p>I own the harvard book of successful essays, compared it, but have found nothing like it…</p>
<p>I’ve already written my drafts for my essay. It is so personal to me that I will never plagiarize anyone’s. So, PM your essay if you want, but I am applying this year.</p>
<p>In what way does it differ from all the others?</p>
<p>the topic and style, pretty much everything, which makes me nervous</p>
<p>sure i can help. sincerely, james</p>
<p>PM me, I"ll give you feedback.</p>
<p>PM it to me, i’d be happy to give you feedback</p>
<p>aznjunior you PMing? Because I have not received your essay yet… just wondering, if you don’t want to that is fine, I was just curious.</p>