<p>Can you please grade my essay. I'm practicing. Thanks. Here is the question:</p>
<p>Many school boards across the country have banned the selling of high-caloric soft drinks and snacks, such as potato chips and candy bars, in cafeterias and vending machines on high school campuses. They argue that the easy availability of junk food encourages poor eating habits that lead to obesity and other health problems. Opponents of the ban contend that the removal of these foods does nothing to change students' eating habits and infringes upon their right to choose. In your opinion, should high-caloric, low-food-value soft drinks and snacks be banned from sale on high school campuses?</p>
<p>Here are the links to my essay. The first link is the first page and the second link is the second page. Make any suggestions about grammar, vocal, structure, word choice, transitions, etc. Thanks again.</p>
<p>All</a> sizes | Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
All</a> sizes | Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing!</p>