Can you grade my ACT essay?

<p>Prompt: Many teachers are reconsidering how they score homework. They believe that if homework is meant as practice for students, then it should not be graded. This, teachers say, will allow students to practice and learn freely without the pressure of getting graded down for making mistakes on knowledge they have hardly had a chance to learn. Students would still receive feedback, but not grades. Other teachers, however, have commented that homework is a responsibility of students, and that grades on it help make sure students do it; plus their scores can be compared to track their progress. In your opinion, should teachers stop grading homework?</p>

<pre><code> There has been a debate whether homework should or shouldn’t be graded. Many schools do and don’t grade homework and every teacher is different. I believe homework shouldn’t be graded. It shouldn’t be graded because it doesn’t access student mastery in a course, many universities’ professors don’t grade homework, and it violates the freedom and students are pressurized.

Even though grading homework encourages students to be responsible and it helps with determining a student’s score in class, it doesn’t help students one bit and many students feel pressurized and don’t get the knowledge they should be getting in class. Teachers waste time grading and that time wasted can be spent coming up with interactive lesson activities or spending time with family.

To start off the topic, homework shouldn’t be graded because students don’t understand what their learning. Many students fail to understand what they are learning at times and grading homework just makes things worse. Students who can’t seek any help are the unfortunate ones because they will end up doing badly on the assignment. In Chicago, students don’t have proper resources to help understand their subject and end up failing class which accounts for the low education values in Chicago. Also, when homework is for a grade, students end up doing homework for the heck of it or cheat and ask others for the answers. For example, a girl in my class didn’t do the homework and the next day, she asked a friend for the answers and ended up failing the assignment because she got caught cheating.

In addition to learning effectively, universities don’t consider the idea of graded homework. Professors say that homework is an opportunity to do better in class and pass tests and quizzes; professors don’t care if you did it or not. In The New York Times, the article stated that students who don’t do their homework end up doing poor on tests and in class as a whole. Also, professors have better things to do in life than to grade poor effort homework assignments and other assignments.
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<p>Subsequently, grading homework violates students’ freedom and students become pressurized. Teachers should understand that it’s a kid’s right whether or not to do the homework. Many students don’t have the ability to finish every homework assignment during the school year and they shouldn’t be punished. Students may have clubs, sporting events, family events, religious events etc. Also, when students get homework, they are pressurized because they have a lot to do, have sports or clubs, and may have other events. Students don’t want to fail class because of their occupied time. When students are pressurized, they may have health issues. For instance, one night, I had a lot of homework and I had a major headache because of the stress and ended up rushing on the homework assignments and going to bed and I got B’s and C’s on all the assignments. So, the idea of grading is not worth the time.</p>

<pre><code> Overall, grading homework should be allowed in many primary and secondary schools. Students don’t learn effectively, universities don’t accept the idea, and students don’t have the freedom and end up feeling pressurized. Schools should take this in consideration and ban the right to grade homework.
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<p>Can you also give me suggestions on grammar and punctuation, structure, organization, transitions, any comments. Thanks.</p>

<p>Score: 8 - Average</p>

<p>Using the personal pronoun “I” is risky business in any essay. I know that the ACT is not a formal essay, but it is advised that you stay formal. I would recommend that you locate a list of vocabulary words and study them. You should be working these into your essay because the ACT expects 11th grade level writing. (Or so they say.) I like the semicolon; however, it is hidden in the middle of the essay. You should focus on providing a good first impression in the first paragraph. I don’t know how many pages this filled up, but you should be trying to hit the last page of the scan-tron. I urge you to write a more traditional, SAT-type essay. Use three examples that demonstrate your knowledge of history and culture. Perhaps you could have talked about a feedback loop between the US and Russia leading to the moon. (The entire world was grading the two countries, and the race continued.) Even if your historical recollections aren’t 100% accurate, you will be far better off including them. Remember that readers only have a short time to analyze the essay. Your conclusion must contain a restatement of the examples, which is hard because you didn’t have three. Please don’t be offended. You may get a 12 with this style, but I achieved a 12 writing one of the worst essays that I have ever written, but it was what the ACT reader was looking for. I know this is painful, but isn’t all standardized testing :wink: ?</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>