Can you guys tell me WHICH essay is better out of the two?

College Essays
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<p>I've written two college essays and I'm not asking you to edit them or deeply critique them. I'm just asking you guys if you can read the two essays and just tell me WHICH one is better, so I can make a decision on which essay to submit on my applications. Briefly explaining why Essay 1 is better than Essay 2 or why Essay 2 is better than Essay 1 would be much appreciated. Let me know so I can PM you both essays ASAP. Thank you so much!!!</p>

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<p>ok but where are ur essays?</p>

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<p>^If you read my post, I said I would PM. Since you JUST joined, I can’t really trust you because I know a lot of people get their essays stolen these days.</p>

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<p>I can take a look at them.</p>

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<p>^Sent …</p>

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<p>PM them to me and I will give you my opinion.</p>

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<p>I can take a look if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>send it over. ill read it =)</p>

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<p>^All sent =)</p>