can you please edit my upenn supplement essay? =)

<p>this is the question...
Which of the academic communities and social communities that now comprise the University of Pennsylvania are most interesting to you and how will you contribute to them and to the larger Penn community?</p>

<p>I'd really appreciate it if someone spent the time to read and give me suggestions or edit it, THANK YOU!</p>

<p>I also finished my Penn communities essay, and I need feedback on it too. I’ll give you feedback on yours if you also give me feedback on mine, that is if you feel comfortable giving your essay to another 2014er. Just PM me</p>