Can you read my Common App Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I was wondering if anyone could proofread and give me critiques on my common app essay. I want you to be brutal because I plan on applying to Stanford and Columbia, who I know get amazing application essays every year. Thanks so much and I really appreciate it!</p>

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<p>PM it and I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>Done, thanks so much!</p>

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<p>PM it. I think i can give some comments.</p>

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<p>PM it my way if you’d like.</p>

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<p>PM if you want and I’ll give feedback</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll send you feedback ASAP!</p>

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<p>PM if you want and I’ll try to my best to give good feedback! :)</p>

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<p>PM it and I will give you my insight!</p>

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<p>PM me if u would like to. Though I’m new here, U can believe me. I’ll give u my insight.</p>

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<p>I can also give you feedback and great insight!</p>

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<p>Me too if you like</p>

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<p>I’d love to help! PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll try to help</p>

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<p>Yeah PM it!
I’ll try my best :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to!</p>

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<p>PM my way, and I might be of assistance. I’m not editor in chief of newspaper for nothing…</p>

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<p>Sure thing, PM me.</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>