<p>I did the common app transfer essay, "reasons for transferring, and what objectives do you hope to achieve"</p>
<p>I would truly appreciate if someone could take a look at and tell me what i need to work on before i submit it.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>I did the common app transfer essay, "reasons for transferring, and what objectives do you hope to achieve"</p>
<p>I would truly appreciate if someone could take a look at and tell me what i need to work on before i submit it.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>