Can you score my SAT essay?

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<p>Please score between 1-6</p>

<p>Topic: What are your thoughts on the idea that failure is necessary for education to take place?
Getting the best education is what we all aim for; but with which approach do we have to take education? It is that supported by failure. Can failure be the beginning of education as one said the novelist John Hersey? Yes it can.</p>

<p>First, education should be a preparation for one’s life. Therefore, since life will undoubtly be marked by some failures, education should also give the apprentice the “opportunity” to fail. It is an opportunity because it is a challenge that the student undertake to demonstrate his capacities in handling difficulties. An education without failures, is a life without mistakes. The latter is impossible and so is the former.
Furthermore, I have discovered lately how beneficial o sot to fail. I have always been used to pass exams –my school exams – easily and had never understood the value of my success until I failed in a solfeggio course I was taking at the conservatory last year. That incident made me work harder to prove myself. That beneficial extra work would not have been done in other conditions although it incited me to develop my knowledge.</p>

<p>Education has two components: learning something new, and be counscious of learning it. When we obtain anything easily we rarely consider it, but fighting for it will surely make us value it.</p>

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<p>3…you don’t have enough examples. lack of organization. Don’t ask so many questions in your intro</p>

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<p>same here, 3/6</p>

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<p>You need to be more specific in your first example. Also, add more details in your examples.</p>

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<p>i think u need to write some more examples!!</p>

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<p>2~3/6.</p>

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<li>Essay is short.</li>
<li>Essay has hardly any elaboration; if you are going to choose one example, you need to show an in-depth knowledge. Yet I don’t see one solid example; instead I see a confusing blend between an assertion and your personal example.</li>
<li>Lack of fluency and organization.</li>
<li>The conclusion portion has some ambiguous referents. What is “it” referring to?</li>
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<p>Thank you all
I know my essay is really bad but i don’t know how to ameliorate it … ill keep on trying!</p>

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<p>^…? Are you the OP?</p>

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<p>^lol same DOB</p>