<p>I have two sort of strange essays. I can't decide which one I want to polish off and use. </p>
<p>I'll PM them to you, I need some constructive criticism. </p>
<p>Hey, I’ll give the best constructive criticism, advice, or praise that I can. PM me.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at them if you still want me to.
I’ll try to respond ASAP if you do need me </p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>Sure I’d love to. The stranger the better.</p>
<p>I’ll read them for you</p>
<p>I will read them (if I don’t respond then just keep messaging me until I do; I can be forgetful).</p>
<p>I will say right off the bat, though, that you should think about how you want colleges to see you. They will only know you through one of these lenses (one of these essays), so think about who you are and which essay most accurately and fully portrays you. :)</p>
<p>Il take a look</p>
<p>I can take a look if you’d like 
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<p>i want to get in on this. PM plz~
will give feedback</p>