<p>I've been writing on the CommonApp esays for months. I had plenteous versions so far, mainly about my ECs, my dilemmas, etc...
But all of a sudden, I felt that all of them were somewhat 'pretentious' and maybe boring among tons of essays alike.
I then just let me write whatever comes to my mind, in one night, and here comes the result. A 750-word essay.</p>
<p>I'm international, and I cant find any native speaker to proofread and comment on the idea and the way I approached it.
So, I would really appreciate if you can help :)
Professional writers/ essay proofreaders/ college students are more than welcome :) and I don't want to send it to other 09ers :)
Nice weekend everyone :)</p>