Care to do me a favor?

<p>I know there is a specific forum for this, but I have found that the College Essay section is frequently used by people who just copy essays. However, I REALLY need some solid feedback on my essay, and am willing to do whatever I have to to get it. Yes I have asked my english teacher, but I need more. Unfortunately, I was not blessed with the gift of English-speaking parents so they are out of the question. </p>

<p>If you would be so kind to take a look at my (700 word) college essay, let me know.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>Parent/English teacher here. I’ll give you an honest opinion. PM me.
Just so you know–I don’t save or copy essays or use them for any other purpose.</p>