Care to read a College of A&S essay? ED ONLY, PLEASE!

<p>The prompt (if you don't know):</p>

<p>Describe your intellectual interests, their evolution, and what makes them exciting to you. Tell us how you will utilize the academic programs in the College of Arts and Sciences to further explore your interests, intended major, or field of study.</p>

<p>If anyone cares to read it and let me know your thoughts, I'd be highly appreciative. But please -- only ED applicants!</p>

<p>i’ll read it. But i got rejected lol. I can send you mine if you like and you can see what NOT to do, (if i hadn’t delete it yet after the heartbreak.)</p>

<p>Ah, thanks for the response but I ended up just submitting it… no big deal.
I’m sorry about the rejection… I got deferred from my number one so I kind of know how you feel… </p>

<p>Again, thanks!</p>