<p>This is my common app essay, answering the question "what fictional character has had an impact on me". I've posted it previously, but since then I've made some changes and I'd love a few people to read it over and tell me what they think. I want to make this essay as good as I possibly can, so any and all constructive criticism is welcome, no matter how harsh.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance! (Oh, and please no rising juniors/seniors in hs. If you're writing/planning on writing your own essays soon it is hard to not get ideas from others' work, however unintentional).</p>