care to read my uc personal statement?

College Essays
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<p>HI</p>

<p>I just finished writing my personal statement to the second uc prompt and was hoping to get some feedback on how to improve it. Let me know if you are interested in reading it and I will PM it to you.</p>

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<p>send it over ~</p>

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<p>sure - already finished mine so don't worry</p>

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<p>sure......</p>

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<p>send it over. PM me</p>

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<p>Absolutely. Would you be willing to read mine as well?</p>

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<p>i can read!</p>

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<p>sure! I'd love to edit your essay. I already finished the essay for the first prompt. Wanna do an essay exchange?</p>

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<p>Sure! I finished mine as well. But I'm looking for more input on my first prompt. Exchange?</p>

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<p>Pm me, i have some experience with the UC essays</p>

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<p>Sure!! I will read it and give you some feedback. PM it to me!! ;]</p>

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<p>I'll check it out ;D</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it when I get a chance</p>

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<p>sign me up ;) i'll give an honest feedback</p>