<p>Hi, I just have a question about part 1 of the app. For career interests, it says you have 400 words. Are you just supposed to say "Medicine" or go into depth explaining what you want to do and use up 400 words?</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
<p>I am an international student from Taiwan. This is my career interest essay, and I need some advices and grammatically correction. I try to be sharp and direct meanwhile condensing many details as my friend suggested. I chose "undecided" as my first major, but my essay seems to lay a great contrast. Will it sound like I was lying for choosing "undecided" but with a sound interest in business program revealed in my essay?
Career interest:
I want to become an investment counselor. My business dream was enlightened by my father, who had the same attracting traits as those figures in Business Weekly: passionate, humorous, and shrewd. Thrilling virtual investing experiences in Barclays Capital investment program concentrated my focus on occupation about investment. To me, investment is the beautiful combination of passion and wisdom.</p>