Carnegie Mellon Supplement

College Essays
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<p>Hi, would anyone be willing to read my Carnegie Mellon supplement essay?</p>

<p>I basically have two drafts with one paragraph different in each version - I can't seem to figure out which one flows better.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’m perfectly willing to read anyone else’s essay as well.</p>

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<p>sure, PM me</p>

4

<p>I can!</p>

5

<p>PM me I can.</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me</p>