Challenge I overcame through persistence essay, critics?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is not in final draft form yet, however I would really appreciate critics/comments/suggestions on it! Preferably people who could respond back within 5-10 days, please and thanks! Anyone?</p>

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<p>Ill read it PM me</p>

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<p>Thanks, anybody else please?</p>

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<p>Will be an honest critique: e-mail it at <a href="mailto:girlspanky@windowslive.com">girlspanky@windowslive.com</a></p>

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<p>I’m down for a read. Shoot me a PM and I’ll try to help you out.</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

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<p>sure i’ll read it, just PM</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read-over.
E-mail is <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or pm me.</p>

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<p>I will read it and provide feedback</p>

<p>Julia</p>

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<p>I will do my best</p>

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<p>Sure! PM it over</p>

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<p>PM me, i’ll give feedback!</p>