Asian American
US domestic
California
Public school (around 2k students, not a feeder)
Asian woman
No hooks
Intended major: public health, data sci, cog sci
4.0/4.8 GPA
35 ACT
Rank 1
Coursework
Taken 4 APs and got all 5s. By the end of senior year, going to take 13 APs and 9 tests
** I’ve taken the most rigorous course schedule possible at my school
Awards:
CA State Seal of Civic Engagement (state awardee)
National Biomedical Research Paper Competition 3rd place
First Place winner of a card-making competition for hospitalized children (international, out of 500k+ cards)
Key Club Distinguished Officer (2x), regional level
VB All Tournament Team + MVP
Extracurriculars
Founder/President/Website Creator of an organization created to aid the mental health of homeless children. Volunteered spotlighted by local homeless shelters, (not going to say what but) donated 500+ of the thingies we make, collab with therapists. Learned how + designed a website by myself to create a system for international participation
State Seal project: hand-built food pantries and implemented them for those struggling and to reduce household food waste. I presented my project to distinguished officials and the Secretary of State, and presented at this famous/official library. Cold-called food & nutrition services for school implementation.
Key Club president + division executive assistant. Over 100+ members in club, logged 3000+ hours as president, raised $2k + for PTP (charity). Represented 1000+ members in the division and led the meetings.
UCLA (blank to not get doxed) Ambassador (merit based program). Engaged in physician round table, fundraised, made 50+ cards for the Child Life Department. Experienced real hospital day-to-day life.
School’s Girls State Delegate/ambassador. Elected onto city council, represented 30 girls, service project platform manager, designed a beach beautification plan, and I’m now a Junior Counselor alternate. This pgrm was very meaningful to me!!! i loved it
Represented my school at the Hugh O’Brian Youth Leadership Seminar (HOBY). It was kind of like model UN imo, but basically diverse backgrounds exchanged perspectives on UN social issues, advocated, listened, and contributed/digested ideas.
NHS VP. 1 of two sophomores admitted (school’s has around 20% acceptance rate). created campus advocacy infographics + on-campus academic advising programs. over 180 hours just tutoring. managed volunteers and teacher help programs.
California Scholarship Federation-- just lots of tutoring lol
(insert program name) researcher + competitor. I studied and presented on weekly research topics like cancer, collaborated with notable physicians from Yale, USC, Brown, etc. Wrote and competed an 11-page research paper on Aplastic Anemia (3rd place nationally, in awards)
(insert a cultural program name) Spirit Coordinator + Inter Club Council Representative. Redesigned the Insta, ensured the charter, organized the fashion show with 2k+ spectators, created detailed meeting minutes.
Volleyball, played 7+ years. 1st in two national qualifiers and placed at Junior olympics twice. At school, I acted as an assistant coach to frosh and took stats + oversaw team logistics. 3x division 1 club captain and school volleyball captain
Those were my common app ones, my UC app had a lot more (like a Refinery comp and UCLA comp i did, etc etc nothing too exceptional though)
Essays/LORs/Other
Common app essay: very unique, niche. I think the writing level wasn’t great though so maybe a 7.5/10, going to rewrite and make better
LORs: 8-9/10. No idea. Got from AP Lang and AP Chem teachers. One from Vice Principal that’s probably a like 9.5/10.
Schools
before you guys hate on me, I’m only applying to places I would genuinely go to. If I don’t get accepted to these schools, I’m going to cc and transfer
Likely:
Probs just like UCI lol
Match:
UCSB, UCSD, Wellesley?
Reach:
a lot.
Yale (rea) rejected yay!
vanderbilt
northwestern
Upenn
cornell
Pomona College
Duke
Dartmouth
Stanford