Hey everyone! Just got done with college apps so I would really appreciate it if some of you chanced me for my reach schools. Nothing too crazy, pretty typical list of reach schools for engineering. Warning: provided lots of info below in order for you to get the best picture.
Schools - Major: Mechanical Engineering, Alt (If Available): Aerospace Engineering
• UC Berkeley, UCLA
• University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
• Purdue
• UT Austin
• University of Southern California
• Georgia Tech (Legacy)
High School and Demographics
• Hispanic male, somewhat affluent (upper 10% income bracket)
• 1st generation American
• Relatively rural public school in Michigan
• Ranked 1st out of 387 students
Comments: Honestly don’t think my ethnicity and race will factor too much into admissions. High school is fairly mediocre, but they’ve sent some students to Brown, Stanford, and MIT over the past couple of years.
GPA and Tests
• GPA: 4.5 (Weighted), 4.0 (Unweighted)
• SAT: 680 (Math), 780 (Critical Reading + Writing)
• ACT: 31 Composite - 34 (English), 29 (Math), 34 (Reading), 26 (Science), 10 (Writing)
Comments: Weak math and science scores relative to other engineering applicants. I’ve never been a great test taker to be honest so I’m hoping my GPA, class rigor, and ECs offset this.
Classes
High School (AP Test Score if applicable):
• Science: Honors Biology, AP Physics I (3), AP Chem (4), AP Environmental Science (In Progress), AP Computer Science A (In Progress)
• Math: Honors Algebra, Honors Geometry, Honors Algebra II, Honors Pre-Calculus, AP Calc BC (In Progress)
• English: Honors English 9, Pre-AP English 10, AP Lang (3), AP Lit (In Progress)
• Social Studies: AP Human Geography (5), AP US History (3), AP Gov (5)
• Foreign Language: German (3 years)
• Other: Varsity Band (Saxophone)
Community College:
(4.0 GPA)
• Intro to Chemistry, Computer Applications, Intro to Engineering and Design, Principles of Engineering, Principles of Macroeconomics
Comments: Received A’s in all classes, but I’m worried if colleges will perceive this as grade inflation. I’m a lot more comfortable in the classroom. My persistence in engineering classes should help indicate my interest in my major.
Work Experience
• Product Development Engineer Intern at Herman Miller. I started this position in June and worked nearly 40 hours a week in the summer, currently work 17.5 hours a week during the school year.
• General Chemistry I & II Tutor at local community college during my junior year. I also worked one-on-one with a special needs student at his home. 7 hours a week.
Comments: I feel that I have very strong work experience, will definitely stand out with my internship.
Activities
• Science Club (President)
• Chemistry Olympiad (Captain)
• Rotary Club (Member): Worked with city planners and director of local energy company to implement a machine learning program to maximize street budgets.
• School District Improvement and Advisory Committee (Student Nominated Rep.): Helped implement professional mentorship opportunities for less fortunate students. Set long and short term district goals.
• Others: Mock Trial (Captain), UNICEF Club (Vice-President and Co-founder), Varsity Soccer (three years), saxophone in band, National Honor Society
Volunteerism
• ~1500 hours at church as vacation bible school mentor, play music at mass, clean church during vacation
• ~400 hours tutoring ESL students in STEM since my sophomore year
• Misc. volunteerism for Blessings in a Backpack, Salvation Army, middle school Lego Club, middle school Mock Trial
Awards and Scholarships
• President’s List at Community College
• AP Scholar with Honors
• High School Science Scholar (Machine Learning Capstone and Service Project)
• Leadership Scholarship - National Youth Leadership Council (Won regional scholarship among a pool of over 100 students)
• Outstanding Attorney - Mock Trial Regional Meet (2016, 2017)
Essays
Common App: Described the steps I took to help a student with Asperger’s while tutoring at my local community college. Talked about how he became more confident in the classroom as we worked together. He told me at one of our last sessions that he became confident enough to start going to school on his own and applied to transfer to a university. He started attending in the fall. I also described how close we got and how much we shared in common. We started hanging out and we loved to play video games. Whenever he’s home we still make some time to play Mario Kart together.
Overall I thought most of my essays were pretty solid: 5/7
Letters of Rec
Glowing letters of recommendation from my employer, college chemistry instructor, TAG teacher, and counselor.
Concluding Thoughts
I know my test scores will knock me down a peg or two, but I think my strong ECs, especially my work experience, will keep me somewhat competitive. Sorry, I know this is already a huge wall of text, but feel free to chance me if you want. I’d greatly appreciate it! Good luck to everyone applying!