I’m looking at EC’s, and this list:
Extracurricular:
Debate team, MUN, Newspaper, Environmental Club, Tour Guide, Mathlete
Sports - Varsity Soccer
Community Service - Taught North Korean defector students English (70+ hours)
Peer tutoring (20+ hours)
Club Leader: MUN Founder & student leader, Mathlete leader, Newspaper Editor next year
Internship: Student Reporter at a Korean newspaper
What I do not see is significant or distinctive achievements, awards, public recognition. The one activity that stands out to me is your volunteer community service. You should explain how your work helped to change lives.
You should show where you provided leadership and unusual initiative. Being on the debate team or newspaper (even as editor) are good EC’s but how well did you do as a debater? Were you a champion? In newspaper did you win recognition and awards for your writing?
In general, you’ve filled all the right boxes with good numbers but I do not see the standout achievements that the highly selective colleges will be attracted to.