Hi, if someone could tell me my chances of getting into Lawrenceville/Peddie/Pingry/Newark, I’d greatly appreciate it!
some background info: I am a 13-year-old Asian-American female applying to 9th grade for boarding.
Sports:
Swimming and taekwondo, I did a little bit of tennis but never really went anywhere with that so I’m not going to include that on my application.
SWIMMING for 6 years, competitive swimmer, 8th in the New Jersey Swimming Championships 50-yard Breaststroke, 3rd in the New Jersey YMCA Swimming Championships 200-yard Medley Relay, some other awards I got but those are just at local meets and not really significant at all, should I include those since there’s a lot but they’re all really easy to get.
TAEKWONDO for 5 years and I’m getting my black belt soon, I was 1st and 2nd in ATA Taekwondo Tournament Forms and Sparring respectively, going to help others and become an instructor at the local YMCA I do taekwondo at, I’m worried that this might not be a strong point for me since I haven’t won many awards as so many other talented people have
academics:
all As and A+s except for one B+ in sixth grade Spanish
I’m really passionate about writing and write a lot of short stories, entered a non-profit writing competition and got 2nd place out of 60 or so pieces, wrote a speech about cleaning up a local park in 2nd grade and spoke to the mayor about it in front of hundreds
at school I am finalizing the logistics for a speech and debate club focusing on congressional debate and public forum and hopefully that will be finished by November.
I am also a member of my schools Student Government and part of the executive board as the Philanthropist (the president position was not available to 7th graders so I will be running for president this year!), as philanthropist raised around $1500 for boo grams for cancer charities like American Red Cross, also did a bake sale for raising money for Ukraine during the war
I have not taken the SSAT yet but hope my percentile will be somewhere above 90 (wish me luck!)
I believe my essays and short answer questions (especially for Lawrenceville) were pretty good and I tried to personalize it to each school which wasn’t that hard to do considering I was only applying to 4 schools. About my essays though, I feel like I might come across as conceited or arrogant, how would I show my accomplishments and personality without… bragging? Suggestions are very much appreciated!
If you could give feedback on my application from your point of view, that would be extremely helpful! I love constructive criticism so don’t go easy on me