<p>Thanks so much! Any improvement suggestions would be incredible.</p>
<p>Objective:
SAT I: 2350, second try
ACT:35
SAT II:760 Math II, 800 Lit
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.8ish
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 40 something / 378 (I go to the 9th best school in the country, very competitive)
AP (freshman - junior):AP Gov (4), AP Lang (5), AP Stats (3, not sending), AP Psych (5), AP Lit (predicted 5 on mock), APUSH (predicted 4/5), AP Micro (Predicted 5), AP Macro (Predicted 5)
IB (place score in parenthesis):IB Chem SL (predicted 5/6), IB Math SL (predicted 6), plus all my HL classes which are 2 year IB classes (see Senior Load)
Over the summer: AP Calc AB, AP Spanish Lang, AP Human Geo, AP Environmental, Dual-Enrollment Math, Dual-Enrollment Creative writing (Yeah, yeah, I'm insane. I've done this kind of work in this amount of time before, so don't worry)
Senior Load: Dual-Enrollment Physics, AP Calc BC, IB Bio SL, IB Spanish V (SL), IB English HL, IB History HL, IB TOK, IB Economics HL
Major Awards: NMS semi-finalist, Pathfinder Award Nominee (hopefully recipient), one or two scholarships, FBLA district Award</p>
<p>Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): International Community Service Club (President), Women's Empowerment Forum (President), Local Com Serv Club (VP), FBLA (President and Founder freshman year at my old school), Track (3 years), CC (2 years, broke foot one season), SGA member (freshman year), Class Secretary (freshman year), chorus/drama (freshman year), internship at a Business controller's office, Internship w/a Senator (Pending)
Job/Work Experience: Tutoring service (made $2000+ one summer offering tutoring classes to younger students in my school, because I had a reputation for being good in math)
Volunteer/Community service:Around 800 hours
Summer Activities:Volunteered at an Orphanage in India which my club is connected to
Essays: Common App & supplements: Writing is my strongest suit
Teacher Recommendation: 1 - 8/10 (teacher really likes me, she went to Brown herself)
2-6/10 (likes me, nothing special in the letter)
Counselor Rec: 7/10 (really likes me, knows I'm motivated, but not a very articulate person)
Additional Rec: From someone in the senator's office, if I get the job
Interview: I'm pretty outgoing, and my college advisor is coaching me on what to say (without it sounding fake), think this will be a strength </p>
<p>Other
State (if domestic applicant): Florida
School Type: Public/Magnet
Ethnicity: Indian (so Asian) / Hispanic
Gender: Female (using brother's account, hence the username, lol)
Income Bracket: 300k +
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, I guess, but much more Indian in me than Hispanic. Still putting it down though </p>
<p>Essay Topic: How I embraced my heritage through dancing with orphan girls in India at 11</p>