Chance me for the UC system !!

<p>okay guys chance me?
my top schools i want to go to are UCSD, UCLA, UCB... UCSD being the highest..
my sat is 1820 (but im retaking in nov. this time actually STUDYING LIKE CRAPmy goal is 2050+ and i think i can make it.. im discovering many new things i never used before.. i am improving my english score..)
Statistics!</p>

<p>CA resident</p>

<p>Subject test: Spanish: 620
Math: taking (best subject so its a high for sure)
Biology Taking (im re-learning, but i like biology so its fun!)</p>

<p>GPA (10-12) is 4.44
i think that makes my UC GPA about 4.2</p>

<p>I have gotten the letter to submit ELC application. which i have done.. now im waiting to see if i got in?!?!?</p>

<p>Extra curriculars:
--Indian Club (just indian stuff. i am the royal chef- i make the food and bring it to the club.. we also hold sporting tournaments, and stuff like that)
--Social Justice-Senior Year: basically help out the animals, etc.
--SlumDogs: gather money for the poor people of India. Senior Year
--me and my friend are thinking about opening a fencing club (i cant fence, but im sorta good). and when we do.. we would have tournaments nad gather money for charity, etc.)
--National Honor Society Senior Year
--President of SDA writer's Club POETRY BRANCH
--I have self-taught to speak, write, Sanskrit
--Self-taught my self Hindi
-- that being said i can speak English, Gujarati, Spanish, Hindi, and some sanskrit (i can pronounce the verses nicely, but the spelling is meh!)
--i write poems and stories for fun</p>

<p>Community Service:
--Freshman Year: used to volunteer at a homeless shelter (where we bascially cooked, and served food to homeless people) it took a couple hours a day.. and a side question (would i include hours from actually cooking or would i include only the serving.. cuz i was a helper in the cooking too)..
this happened on and off ( i got busy and all) but the hours are around 400(could be more could be less, have to ask my parents)</p>

<p>(so long story short
Volunteer: 400 hours +/- </p>

<p>Work Experience:
worked at a hotel for about 1 year.. did some housekeeping at hotel, then got promoted to front desk!.. i work only during busy seasons so i was there all summer long.. about 4 hours a day.. and over school its on and off.. i go when they need me. but im thinking about starting again</p>

<p>Major- pharmacology.
note: i tried to volunteer at scripps hospital.. but it was full</p>

<p>Financial needed
Essays good (their okay.. im taking a class where they help prepare you to write a good college essay)... ive got started, check hte bottom:</p>

<p>AP Classes
Ap World-3
AP Chemistry-3
AP US History- 3
AP ENG LANG- 3
AP CALC BC -5
AB CALC AB subscore - 5</p>

<p>SENIOR CLASSES
AP Psychology
AP ENG LIT
AP GOVT
AP ECON</p>

<p>i have also taken a ROP class
ROPCompGameDesi
ROP = regional occupation program</p>

<p>i have gone up to Spanish 5</p>

<p>oh right.. i work cuz i wanna pay for my own fees not parents paying for it.</p>

<p>BTW i know UCs dont require recommendation letters, but can i add those or they wont look at it?</p>

<p>thanks.. cmon pleasee chance mee. i really want to know.. im excited to know ...
ill chance you if you chance me..
(haha that reminds me of pokemon.. )</p>

<p>EDIT: its long yes.. but please i barely get any replies.. please please please!
for a chocolate strawberry? </p>

<p>okay here is my application outline too:
so chance me and comment please :)</p>

<p>(its long so please help me out, be a pal :) )
Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)
Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>--#1:
---(these are my ideas, in a sense-its what I posted on a forum to get feedback) i can talk about being indian, and how i always read indian newspapers and am shocked at the destruction in india. there are thousands of people in india who are illiterate, hundreds of thousands are suffering from a disease, and the majority have no money to live. i visit india almost every year and i see no progress in the country. it may be rising to be one of the global powers but the nation still doesnt care for its people. i want to be a pharmacist because i want to use this knowledge in medicine to go around the world (maybe teaming up with doctors) and helping people out with the type of medication they should take. many people around the world, who suffer from a disease, cannot do a thing about it, because they have no cash. (is this a good start or is this more leaning towards prompt 2?)</p>

<p>--- (this is what my beginning is going to look like) i come from the land where four lions stand atop a pillar rawring in the four directions. I come from a land where the nation motto is Satyameva Jayate -Truth Alone Triumphs. i come from the great land- India. Although i was born in California, i was raised with Indian culture, Indian thoughts, and Indian beliefs. I always regarded India as the best country and i still respect it more than any other nation i have visited, however there were things in India that moved me. I remember driving along the 101 highway, there i saw a sign. Littering Fine- $100. and sure enough the area was sparkling clean. there were only healthy people roaming the streets. those who needed a job were scarcely found, or at least unrecognizable. But india was a different country. the moment you step out of the airport terminal you are welcomed by a wave of people who you could actually recognize as employed or unemployed. Many people who walked the roads were hunch-backed, crouching, bleeding, and poorly dressed. Was there no moral standard in India? or was the government not keen on compassion? Why was there a difference between america and India? India was a early country, started in 3000 BC, while america was found in the mid 1600's. </p>

<p>---What I want to do with this prompt is describe my life in America and then discuss my first visit to India, describing how shocked I was that the conditions were so poor compared to America. Then I would explain some of the things that were so much worse than in America that really inspired me to want to help change things. Like I guess talking about how great life in America is, will serve as a sharp contrast against the poor conditions in India and get the reader to feel even more sympathetic to the message, but im not sure if that’s what the essay is asking?. ---</p>

<p>Prompt #2 (all applicants)</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>--This is going to be on public speaking—</p>

<p>tenth and eleventh grade were the years i surprisingly shined. i never used to talk in class. i rarely raised my hand. it was just so embarrassing for me. every time the teacher called on me to read to the class or answer a question my ears would turn a shade of deep pink. i always wondered what the others would say or think about me. i never got together my own mental conscience, and never took a chance at life. however, in tenth grade i was assigned to make a video about some book we read (using a modern outtake) and show it to the class.. as the movie ran on, my head was buried under my arms, shying away from the rest of the world where they would see my hideous and horrid acting. after the movie ended, everyone turned to me and said i did an excellent job, even the teacher was surprised. then for our Individual Learning Project, we each had to learn something and present it to the class. many chose dancing, or gardening, however i chose to learn a language- Hindi. We each had two practice rounds, where we would practice how to formally speak, etc. then the final presentation of what we learned. I nailed each and every presentation and shocked myself slightly more than i had shocked the class. every time i went up there i was, a different person. i was no longer a shy person, but rather a public spokesman, enjoying every last bit of it. then in 11th grade we had to present a decade for US history. my group chose the 70's and i was appointed to overlook the entire project and be Nixon, and recite a speech about the war in vietnam. I was really nervous, i could practically hear my heart beating and i felt like my chest would explode shooting out small confetti pieces full of blood . when i started my Nixon speech i could see 38 pairs of eyes gleaming on me, laughing at me for the way i acted, watching me from every angle. But halfway through i started gaining mental control and shocked the teacher and everyone in the class..</p>

<p>oh come on … 21 views and not one person wants to chance me ???</p>

<p>please… if you dont want to read the essay dont, but chance me atleast!! :)</p>

<p>PPLEEASSEE CHHANCE yaar!</p>

<p>EDIT: I also am in robotics!</p>

<p>Didn’t you already make a chance thread for yourself? Please, do not double post.</p>

<p>@bsmd11
yes i did… but that was different from this one… i am asking for a all the UC’s to see if it is… and i have added my volunteer update and also another EC, and i have also posted my prompts outline…the other threads are “dead”</p>

<p>so folks this is a double post but with additional DETAIL… so please just chance me, please</p>