<p>Lorem, for my EC activity I coordinated Partnership Walk, which is a fundraiser from which 100% of the profits go to 3rd world countries. I coordinated all the logistics for my school and even raised 6000 dollars last year. I have been coordinating this for 3 years. Plus, I am also the team lead for volunteer activities at my church and have coordinated major service days, and all regular volunteer functions. For Mock Trial, when I became team led, our team won Regionals 
Also for MAT, I increased attendance to math competitions and we had several tournament winners. Do you think pulling up my GPA to 3.8 UW will help? And as for school leadership team, we implemented extended lunch (:p) and negotiated cell phone policies. Do you think that is good, I am loving your suggestions ty!</p>