Well, I listed my current extracurriculars above.
My previous application was geared around being a journalism/English major. Having not won national/international writing contests and having little experience with journalism, my application wasn’t great.
I put down Scouting, band, Model UN, Philosophy Club, etc. on my first application.
At the time, I had my Girl Scout Gold Award, but didn’t have my Eagle Scout award. I forgot to mention that I was president of Model UN.
I only had a few school leadership positions (principal trumpet, Model UN president, Philosophy Club president). I also only had one scholarship at that point and a national piano achievement.
Since then, I became an All-State musician, was selected for the All-American D-Day Band, and was accepted to the Midwest Band Clinic.
At my current school, I have leadership positions in 3 clubs that in total oversee operations for 350+ people.
I listed an online magazine I worked for, but when I submitted applications, I had worked for them for 9 months - 1 year. Now, I worked for them for 2 years. I am also a journalist for a professional environmental newsdesk, a communications intern for a national humanitarian organization, and write for several other groups.
I had published a poetry book, but now I am in several anthologies and placed in the Penguin Random House Creative Writing Awards. They sent me free books and I got to talk to Amanda Gorman.
I had also started an educational website and literary magazine a few months before submitting applications. Now, I have been running it and managing a team for 1.5 years. I have had dozens of submissions and engaged hundreds of people.
Regarding new things, I was named a top 10 incoming freshman and top 50 incoming journalism student.
Therefore, I was given a research position as part of a selective fellowship, where I am the only undergraduate on my team and will be co-authoring a paper in the spring. I have already received recognition for my research within my school.
Through another program at school, I started a team to work with two NGOs in sub-Saharan Africa to raise $50k for reusable feminine products. Many of these women don’t know what a pad is, so we are providing them with education and materials to alleviate period poverty. I already received a grant from Roots and Shoots for the project.
Additionally, I became an ambassador for the American Conservation Coalition, which is a national environmental group. I am working on getting signatures for environmental petitions and spreading awareness about bipartisan environmental efforts.
I took part in a climate education program. As part of that, I worked with Harvard researchers to determine environmental policy solutions and gave a TedEd talk.
And additionally, I was selected for a Department of State fellowship where I am working on wildlife conservation projects with university students in Namibia.
Meanwhile, I have been in the honors college at my current school and have received a 4.0 my first semester. It’s not like my grades were bad in high school. I had a 3.86 unweighted GPA.
I’ve also received 10 more scholarships since my applications, including a national essay contest about renewable energy.
I’ll hopefully submit my application for the Presidential Service Award as well before the deadline.
I’d say that application is a lot different than: Girl Scout Gold Award, teaches piano, does band, Model UN, Philosophy Club President, maybe dabbles in a few other things, and published a book. And even then, I was waitlisted at schools like UChicago.
And it is genuinely that I didn’t know what policy was before and had no access to environmental classes in high school. I have always been passionate about the environment and did many conservation projects through Scouting. However, my previous application was creative writing focused. I have had the opportunity to show my interest in the environment through my internship, ambassador position, Department of State program, climate education program, environmental newsdesk, etc.
Also, I am currently waiting to hear back on my Oxford Climate School application and interview results for an environmental policy internship. Not sure how that is just me changing my major for a better acceptance rate.
My school is also nominating me for two fellowships that would take me to Africa and the UK to learn more about climate change and climate policy.