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<p>If your app is vaporware - I’m not saying you shouldn’t list it, but maybe don’t make it the first thing. Where did you get the $138k figure from?</p>
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<p>Should be ‘venture capital firm’, I think.</p>
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<p>In other words, you do not have sponsorship from Google, State Farm, Macy’s or Ludacris.</p>
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<p>Why do you have a yacht party? How many celebrity yacht parties have you had? Did your contestants actually get funding for their ideas? How many of them? Did the yacht parties take away money that could have gone into venture funding? You don’t have to answer this all here, but adcoms are going to wonder about it.</p>
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<p>Grossed sounds a little concerning. Because then I wonder about the net. And who did you gross it from? Teenage investors? That concerns me! Do you mean $65k in assets under management? That would be pretty impressive. Or was it $65k in returns before taxes etc.? On what kind of principal? Again, don’t have to answer these here, but adcoms will wonder.</p>