OK this is it, I am Posting this!
So I am going to apply for Wharton BBA this year early action, and if not accepted then in some other ivies in RD
Focus: Actuary Sciences and Finance
Origin: Pakistan (Race: South Asian)
Citizenship: US Permanent Resident
Academic Path & Achievement : This is where the deal lies. I studied in a Trust School in Pakistani educational system my whole life. It is a very low quality educational system where you just got to memorize whatever your teacher writes on the blackboard. We memorized entire essays, theories even Math Concepts. No one will ever try to explain anything or try to make you be clear enough on concepts to write the answers yourself. Just memorize it and write it off in exams.
I wasn’t just the top of my class. I was the School Topper in that system… I would score Highest Percentage scorer in entire secondary section throughout class 6 and 7.
Now as it happens, there were only two options available for me to study. I could be a doctor or an engineer. But, I didn’t want to be either of those. I wasn’t happy with the way I was being taught. I was already scoring the highest in my entire school but I still wasn’t learning any worthwhile stuff. So I took the hardest and craziest decision that a 13 year old could make.
I dropped out of school and decided to take a curriculum that I couldn’t afford. It is the A Level Cambridge affiliated matriculation system that only the richest could afford. I was the poorest. My Father had abandoned me and my mother after he tried to kill her before she could give birth to me. We lived with our grand parents and two aunts.
So the only way left for me to do was to try to take this on myself. I bought second hand cheap books and started to teach myself. From my local education to this international one, it was a huge jump. I had no reading/analytical/ or heck, even linguistic skills. I couldn’t speak a sentence of English, how was I supposed to write explanatory essays in it. I couldn’t take a lot of Advanced Courses but that is because I had to take this journey without a teacher by my side which I hope will be considered by Universities.
Grades: O Level (9,10,11th Year): | Urdu: A, English Language: A, Math: A, Economics: A, Business Studies: A, Commerce: A* |
A Level (12, 13th year): | Economics A, Business Studies: A, Math: C (3 papers in 1 day)|
Graduation date: 13 January 2016
Job/ Work Experience: I am working since I am 13, in order to finance my exam registration fees. I had to do every low paying Freelance job online. I did ghost writing, Translations. I wrote a lot of employee handbooks, product descriptions, Taglines. I worked with a firm as a CV, LinkedIn Profile and Cover Letter writer. I even wrote Masters coursework for people so I could pay my fees
Extra-curricular: As you can imagine, I was never offered them. I loved debating but there aren’t any MUNS in Pakistani Trust Schools. I spend any free time I have in learning about Security Analysis/ Investment Banking or Music Production/ Djing.
Other Activities: Heavy Family responsibilities… My family was a mess after my mother’s divorce as that stopped my aunts from getting married in our conservative society. I posed as my grand father and found them grooms through matrimonial etc. I also made my mother remarry. She happened to marry a person in US and brought me here with her last month
SAT: As per practice results: Above 1500 / 1600
SAT subjects: My finances doesn’t allow me to give those.
Income Bracket: $25000 for 3 People in family + 4th person Child support
Step Father is sole earner, no work permits for me or my mother yet
Common App Essay: I plan to write about my life’s circumstances here a bit
Wharton Essay: I Plan to write about some of my own deduced business theories and a future business plan based on those with aim of removing financial gap in society through a Social corporate responsibility accepting and Profit reinvesting banking institution that operates in a certain way, creation of an accompanying education system and use of external economies of scale etc and something about my passion of music business, as I want to use my education in more than one ways.
Harvard/Columbia/Stanford Essay: How my religious and social ways changed through my life, and how they could be changed for rest of our society.
or idk I am working on those
Counselor Recommendation: My mother will have to write it, she is a Masters in Education so she can define my methods of studying, (Extensive Book and Internet study on topic, Then Use of Past questions as guidelines of testing knowledge and writing as much as I know in answer of every question to reinforce the knowledge, and working on exam answering technique as third step). She can also share some insights on my family duties, the way she brought me up etc)
Teacher Recommendation: 1- My Aunt. she is the one who made everything possible, she is teaching me since I am 3 year old, and she can tell them about the way I have been…
2- My 6/7 Grade English teacher, she practically cried the day I left school… She loved me and she is an English teacher so I am expecting something decent
3- Possibly, a Pakistani university teacher of my mother who is GA too and has influenced my social philosophical views widely, He is helping me navigate through the life here too
Other Recommendation: My main Free Lance work provider, who was shocked when he learnt that the person doing all the corporate environment inquires was 15 years old. He knows my family situations and hardships I have been through.
My Dunkin Donut employer that I will work with soon, they kind of love me already…
State: GA
Gender: F
Age: 18 going on 19 right now 
Gap Year: I had to do this international immigration from Pakistan to US which kind of forced the gap year on me
Hooks: Umm Father was Doctor, Mother is M.ED, Step Father studied till just high school, all from Pakistan… No one have US Education yet
Thank you so much for your time, if you read all that… I know that Universities are very unpredictable, but I just want you to look at this profile and remember that Ivies like to build a diverse class, but are competitive like hell.
And just give me your intuitive reaction…
Can I make it?
Thank You!