Chance me Please!?

<p>Background Info:
- High School: Extremely rigorous, top 50 high schools in the nation
- Indian (South Asian)
- Income: 150k</p>

<p>Computer Science Major!</p>

<p>I messed up really bad in high school until junior year. W = weighted, UW, = unweighted
Sophmore year: 3.0 UW (3.167 W), 2.67 UW (2.83W)
Junior Year: 3.67 UW (4.167 W), 3.67 UW (4.167 W)
UC GPA: 3.62</p>

<p>SATs (Barely prepped):
1st attempt: 1850
2nd attempt: 1980</p>

<p>Going to attempt again in October, I'm positive I will get at least a 2100, and possibly a 2200, I'm studying 2 hours daily every weekday over the summer.</p>

<p>ACT:
1st attempt: 32
Going to attempt again in September, aiming for 34 or higher.</p>

<p>SATII: Math (760), Bio (770)</p>

<p>Others:
- 150 hours community service
- DECA (Business Club):
- 3rd in Northern California for Math Marketing
- 4th for presentation, 8th overall for Advertising Campaign in States competition
- YouTube Partner with a channel on Technology (relates to my major, computer science)
- 2,800 subscribers
- My technology guides and reviews have been watched 1.1 MILLION times
- Started an organization this summer to raise money for charity through online gaming. Raised about $700 so far.
- Intro to Computer Science course over the summer, got an A
- Intro to Programming in C course over the summer, got an A</p>

<p>I have been slacking throughout high school until junior year. At the summer, end of the sophmore year, I went to India and realized I am taking everything I have for granted. While others in India are yearning to learn but forced in mediocre schools, if any, I am slacking off, even though I am given the opportunity to attend one of the nations top 50 high schools. The vacation to India opened my eyes, and I realized I need to make the most of my fortunate situation. I tried throughout junior year, with 3 AP courses, and got a 3.67 unweighted, 4.167 weighted GPA.</p>

<p>What are my chances of getting in? I'm extremely passionate about technology and would love if I could further develop my knowledge by majoring in Comp Sci at great college.</p>

<p>Your most damaging point is your GPA, but other than that you are a great candidate! Perhaps you can explain the turning point (your trip to India) that forced you out of your slacker habits in your personal statement. Best of luck to you! </p>

<p>UCSD Class of 2016! (CS Major)</p>

<p>i would say you have a great chance - provided you show rigorous classes for senior year, excellent essay that really tries to catch the readers attention, and get * at least * B’s on your senior grades (they look at that to too, to judge whether you slack off or if you are worthy of being a Triton).</p>

<p>Something worth mentioning is UCSD has switched to the holistic view (since class of 2016; semi-holistic for Class of 2015) so GPA isn’t all that matters. It is nonetheless important, but it isn’t weighted as hard as it used to. The thing about the holistic system is that it allows the admin officer to really look at everything in general to analyze you more appropriately. So while your low GPA exists, it could be made up for by increasing GPA throughout Junior/Senior year; excellent SAT/ACT scores, wonderful essays that might explain the low GPA, the best ECs (for this one- i suggest picking the ones that really stand out. It could be just me, but i chose not to include the general “what everyone might have” ECs just because i hated being compared to others [kinda a personal pet peeve] … so i figured the best way to stand out is to have ECs that demonstrate my personality, my likes, my decisions, my thoughts, my this and that. For example, one of my ECs was self learning Sanskrit. From this i assume the admission officer recognized that I was studious, interested in language, prepared for a challenge (sanskrit isn’t easy lol), and so on so forth… lol just an example :smiley: ]</p>

<p>I believe you can choose up to 5 ECs and volunteering/work; awards; and summer classes are in a section of their own! I especially like the youtube one [I love tech too, so if you could post/ PM me the link to your channel, it would be much appreciated :slight_smile: ]</p>

<p>So the bottom line is: GPA matters to a limit, provided you realize that you really need to have a upwards streak (so admission officers know you are putting in that effort, they really love seeing progress).</p>

<p>And yeah… if you have any questions or what not UCSD related, you can always PM me :slight_smile:
I’m here for a fellow Triton Wannabe!</p>

<p>and since Toan posted his/her year, i might as well continue the trend:</p>

<p>Class of 2015 baby! Trriiiiitonnnnss!!!</p>

<p>Yeah my courses for next year are even more rigorous than Junior year.
4 weighted classes:
AP Calc BC
AP Physics B
Finite/Discrete
AP World</p>

<p>Non-Weighted:
Gov/Econ
CP English</p>

<p>You may or may not get in. It can really go either way. You shouldn’t expect a certain score for your SAT, but definitely keep working hard at it. Your ACT is fine, though. </p>

<p>What is really going to tip your application over to the “Accepted” side of the fence will probably be your personal statements and how you tie your passions together. Does your application show what kind of person you are and what you love in life?</p>

<p>I see what you mean, Ace. I think I will sign up for Flex College Counseling, as they really help mold your senior profile and essay. Even though it’s $4,000, I think I’ll make that money back if I get into a better college with their help rather than I would if I wrote the college app entirely myself.</p>

<p>It’s not hard to write a good college app. You can pay a huge sum but if your marks dont say you have the chance then you wont have a chance. </p>

<p>What I’m saying is- these college counseling people aren’t going to guarantee your admission, so unless you get your money back if you don’t get into college, I dont see the point. </p>

<p>Here are a few things to keep in mind (ill add more later on).
The big focus is going to be the essay. That is one of the most important things to keep in mind and the only way you can finalize the best essay possible is by editing , reviewing, and doing rereading a bajillion times. Have parents/teachers/friends/neighbors, etc. give you their input on the essay. Keep a record of each draft so you can go back to whichever one and compare the difference. Personally speaking, I know I spent countless hours just sitting at my desk thinking of a perfect topic and refining that extensively. (My two topics were my admiration for pharmacy (and how that shaped the world around me) and a speech I presented in APUSH)… </p>

<p>Anyway, the admission officers have a life too, so you don’t want to give them something boring, because chances are that applicants just ahead of you (who’ve gotten their apps read) will have a really boring essay (no offense to anyone). So you want to make this the most sensitive, most amazing, a sensational essay such that these officers won’t think twice. The entire point to these essays is to give the officers a taste of who you are (based on your writing style and stuff like that). They can’t tell crap from the other stuff except how educated you are, and your likes and dislikes, but kinda like a relationship, there is so much more!!</p>

<p>Keep it exciting, keep it short (an appropriate length) Mine was 700/300 or something like that, and I think i did a pretty good job. Also, remember to introduce and conclude appropriately. You want to start fantastically, so they get an attraction to your essay, and you want to end dynamically, so they can keep your essay (and you) in mind while reading the next applicant’s stuff [it sounds evil, and it probably is, but life goes on…]</p>

<p>one last thing- make sure you are always on topic, don’t go off on an irrelevant tangent :)</p>

<p>Just to sum up this section- those who helped me were-

  • My College Apps Seminar teacher, who read (due to course requirement) both essays about 3x each.
  • A couple of tutors who gave me tips on what I need to improve.
  • A few students in CAS (again it was an activity in the class)</p>

<p>Good Luck. I’ll add more when i have time, but start thinking about potential topics (last years prompts are online, and chances are they may be the same!) [and if not, you already have an idea of what sort of thing you are looking to write about [oh btw. write about something that you really feel excited to talk about!!]</p>

<p>My counselor told me the prompts will remain the same, most likely. Can you link me to the prompts? To be honest, I’m completely lost as to where I should begin my college apps. I’ve heard so many things: personal profile, essays, personal statement, etc. but have not idea where to begin. I’ve heard about responding to prompts, but idk where the prompts are. Do they vary per UC or what?</p>

<p>[University</a> of California - Personal statement](<a href=“http://www.universityofcalifornia.edu/admissions/how-to-apply/personal-statement/index.html]University”>http://www.universityofcalifornia.edu/admissions/how-to-apply/personal-statement/index.html)</p>

<p>They are the same for all UCs. </p>

<p>For convenience I have pasted the prompts here too:</p>

<p>Freshman applicant prompt
Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Prompt for all applicants
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>I’ll walk you through everything tomorrow or something
BTW: prompts = Personal Statements = essays :slight_smile:
There are two parts to the application. Filling out a big form and writing 2 "personal statements) max. 1000 total (i believe)</p>

<p>Before we begin, keep a few things in mind- there are tens of thousands of applicants, only a very minimal number can be accepted into UCSD, so it’s your responsibility to make sure you turn in something that is fabulous.</p>

<p>The UC App has two big things- the “Application Part” where you add all your info, classes, ECs, Volunteer stuff, etc. and the Personal Statement (you would just copy and paste).</p>

<p>My suggestion is to do a bit of both each day (or whatever suits you), with greater emphasis on the essay (because as I mentioned in another post, the essay shows who you are). For the application itself, I would compare it to checking out online. They ask you for your name, address, whether you are a CA resident or not, and stuff like that. They need a credit card to charge the fee for applying to EACH UC (so if you apply to 5 UCs, you would be getting the base price (i forget) * 5). How many UCs you app for depends on your personal choice, but don’t leave out a campus if you think you won’t get in (and have at least one safety to fall back on). You also get to choose the respective majors for the campus’ selected (and in the case of UCSD, you get to rank your pref. to colleges (ie. Muir, Revelle, ERC… etc-- there are tons of things out there for more info on UCSD colleges, so just google or search these forums)</p>

<p>This is all the basic stuff. Now comes the interesting parts. The “Know me even better” part of the application is where you add in your college courses, your classes that gave you some credit (this could be college courses, courses taken in HS that gave you college credit (Not APS, the AP exam gives you college credit, I’m referring to classes only, etc.). Basically, you fill out the class, year, grade (I won’t go into too much detail, but if you run into trouble ask your counselor, who might i recommend is an excellent excellent person to go to, to get even better feedback on your paper). </p>

<p>Then the interesting parts come- this is what I call the “How Interesting Are You?” where the UC app asks you to put (5 max. per category) EC’s / volunteer work / jobs/ awards/ leadership etc. You want to a) make a list of EVERYTHING that could go into each category and b) pick out the ones that suit you the most.
The rule here for me was to pick the ones that really “showed me off” when compared to other students. Don’t strive to be someone else (or someone you are not), strive to be yourself, because that’s what UCSD is looking for. </p>

<p>Here are my ECs:
*participated in FIRST ROBOTICS
*HAL 2010: Physics club
*INDIAN club: Head Chef
*Writers block, Poetry Branch: President

  • Self Learn Sanskrit</p>

<p>As you can see I chose to show them different “colors” of me. None of my ECs are related (which is both a good thing and a bad thing- good b/c it shows you are interested in a variety of things,… bad: I don’t have a clear choice of what I like. ]. In these cases, I think it’s more important to show your interests in relation to your major (but it wouldn’t harm you to throw in a few “outside” things)… but again, whatever suits you the best!</p>

<p>A big one is Leadership! Get involved with clubs etc. Have at least a few (more than 1). If you aren’t in any (or just one), take the liberty to create a few clubs on campus. </p>

<p>Volunteers Hours are usually an easy one. Either you have a lot of volunteer hours from various places, or you have one or two with a lot of hours (either works fine, and they both show how dedicated and committed you are!)</p>

<p>I think these are the highlights of the UC App. Just remember, there are going to be tons of people apping for UCSD (and other UCs), so you want to stand out the most. Make what you write 9in the PS, and ECs etc.) show who you really are. Try not to make the PS “boring” per se. Always remember to SHOW not TELL (show as in take the reader there with you, otherwise if you are telling it to them, it gets boring very quickly. Read my above post for the details on the PS. And feel free to ask me questions :)</p>

<p>submit the app early too (don’t wait until 11:59 PM on the last day the application is due. Chances are the servers will crash and UCs will be like, “Too bad”) I suggest at least a week in advance.</p>

<p>Good Luck, Have Fun, and dedicate a lot of time to revising those personal statements.</p>

<p>(A tip for PS- write as much as you want for both PS, dont focus on the cut off limit. For example, the cutoff should be 1000 words (total)? so don’t keep monitoring your essay to see if both add up to 1000. Rather write as much as you want, and then start chopping some pieces off little by little (this is when counselors, tutors, writing lab, parents, etc. come in handy). Read the PS to yourself aloud many times, you’ll get a better sense of where your writing falters, and what points aren’t important.</p>

<p>Wow, I really appreciate your help Patel. You’ve made it extremely simpler. Basically we only do the application, filling in info, and then the personal statement, which is responding to the prompt. Do we respond to just the freshman prompt, or both prompts?</p>

<p>As for the application, where we input classes and other info, is there a form or something that we put everything in, or…?</p>

<p>Both prompts. The site lists three prompts- one for freshman only, one for transfers only, and one for all applicants (both freshman and transfers).</p>

<p>Yeah, it’s extremely simple. In fact it’s so simple you will want to procrastinate, but don’t. Get everything over with ASAP so you can spend majority of your time revising hte personal statements.</p>

<p>My memory is a bit faded for the classes section, but yeah there is a form. It’s extremely easy too. the only thing I would worry about is finding out whether your school is a quarter system or a semester system. My HS had a quarter system where we had two quarters in 1 semester, so it got confusing because on the app we were supposed to put semester system. lol. </p>

<p>You’ll only be putting in the “A-G” courses, so just the name of the class, what year you took it, the grade you got, and other stuff I may have forgotten to mention.</p>

<p>You may also want to consider looking at:
<a href=“http://www.universityofcalifornia.edu/admissions/counselors/files/ApplyOnline_12-13_Freshman.pdf[/url]”>http://www.universityofcalifornia.edu/admissions/counselors/files/ApplyOnline_12-13_Freshman.pdf&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>just skim over it and you’ll find out what you will “need”. Also on page 4, there is a “worksheet” that i suggest you do. It will help in your second half of your app. I forgot to mention this, but upon reading the pdf, i remembered that the system also has spot where you can add (is it up to 5??) classes (or maybe more) that are non A-G. So these would include college classes, etc. If you have some- great! if not- it’s no biggie. </p>

<p>I had a class: Video Game Design (ROP) (for example sake)</p>

<p>Honestly, the application should not be something to worry about. It takes 2-3 hours (but don’t do it in one go, that’ll just shut you down, do it in parts.)</p>

<p>Ah, we do all 3 prompts?</p>

<p>no no no.

</p>

<p>If you are an incoming freshman, you do the ones which are for freshman. (the first one and the third one)… the site also says: FRESHMAN so… ;)</p>

<p>Transfers means a student who is currently going to college and is transferring over the UCSD usually as a junior</p>