Chance me (rewrite, shorter) help help help. :)

Chance Me / Match Me!
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<p>Sophomore transfer from a California CC to University of WA in Seattle, WA
I want to transfer from a community college to Uni of WA-Seattle after only 1 year at the CC. Will I make it?</p>

<p>Here is my high school stats:</p>

<p>Freshman Year:
B's, C's, 1 D</p>

<p>Summer School:
B's</p>

<p>Sophomore year:
A's, B's, 1C</p>

<p>Summer School:
B's</p>

<p>Junior Year:
A's, B's, 1 C, 1 D</p>

<p>Summer School:
A's, B's</p>

<p>Senior year:
A's, 1 C</p>

<p>Took 2 AP classes and 1 honors class, and I got A's in all.</p>

<p>Extra Curricular in high school:
National Honors Society
National Art Honors Society
California Scholarship Federation
Career Path Completion in Human and Social Services
Hip Hop Team 3 years
President and Founder of the Breast Cancer Awareness Club
Key Club Public Relations officer
Viking Valor Award in Science
Honor Roll 4 times in a row</p>

<p>SAT score: 1710
ACT score: 24 Composite</p>

<p>GPA: 3.33 ***. weighted
(my high school official transcript doesn't show my unweighted)</p>

<p>So far in college (2nd semester of freshman year):
All A's, 2 B's </p>

<p>I'm in the honors program,
I'm secretary of the honors club,
I'm in Alpha Gamma Sigma,
I'm in Grad club,
and I'm in Gamma Beta Phi</p>

<p>My plans are to become a dentist.
Right now, I am in a 10 week school to become a certified dental assistant, as well as in college doing my general education.</p>

<p>OKAY, WITH ALL THAT SAID, IF I WRITE A KILLER ESSAY, DO YOU THINK I HAVE A SHOT?
I'm out of state BTW. I was to go from a California CC to University of Washington.
This is my 2nd time applying to UW. :) They rejected me out of high school.</p>

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<p>It’s very doubtful, generally sophomore transfers would have made it into the school as freshman or were borderline. You were reaching pretty significantly as a high school applicant. You will probably need to get at least two 3.6+ semesters and apply as a sophomore winter/spring transfer. Killer essays will not do the trick, solid results are really the only thing that can get you in. Killer essays can help a borderline student in but cannot make up for poor results.</p>