<p>Hi! I'm back to the chances thread, a few updates!</p>
<p>These are the schools I'm definitely applying to, in no order:</p>
<ol>
<li>USC Marshall</li>
<li>Georgetown McDonough (EA)</li>
<li>Carnegie Mellon Tepper</li>
<li>Upenn Wharton</li>
<li>Penn State</li>
<li>Florida State</li>
<li>Wake FOREST</li>
<li>Ohio State</li>
<li>San Diego State</li>
<li>WashU</li>
</ol>
<p>Stats!
SAT
Math: 630
Writing: 690
Reading: 670
Total: 1990</p>
<p>GPA: UW 3.86, W of 4.4</p>
<p>Classes:</p>
<p>Eighth Grade: German 1 (basically honors)</p>
<p>Freshman:
Honors English
German 2 (Basically honors)</p>
<p>Sophomore:
AP World History (3 on exam)
Honors Algebra 2
Honors English
Honors/AP Biology</p>
<p>Junior:
Honors Trigonometry
Honors Pre-Calculus
AP Microeconomics
AP English Language/Composition
AP Environmental</p>
<p>Senior:
AP Government
AP English Literature
AP Calculus AB
Ap Statistics</p>
<p>Extracurriculars:
FBLA - Vice President, numerous (over 15) state/region awards, over 200 hours community service
Soccer - Club captain, tournament awards, 13 years playing
Soccer coaching - 4 years, team awards
Girl Scouts - 50 hours
Community service project - huge town charity, made $2300 one night and in news
Charity babysitting - babysit for low income families, tutor kids for free
Relay for life co captain</p>
<p>Other clubs and small community service stuff, not really important. Don't wanna have a list.</p>
<p>I cashier and babysit as jobs to support my family. **Key for me, essay will be based on this.</p>
<p>Hooks:
1st generation and low income family.</p>
<p>My essay is about supporting my family no matter how bad a childhood, I've started it and it's relatively good.</p>
<p>I know my one recommendation will be great, I'm not sure yet who'll write the other.</p>
<p>Any improvements you see is great, thanks!</p>
good luck</p>