I come from crappy, rural town. We have like one of the highest rates of teen pregnancy in California. 
First generation college student
Hispanic
Weighted GPA :4.23 Unweighted : 3.83
SAT : 1870 ACT : 29 Both scores are very high for my school. My counselor said my scores are the highest she’s ever seen. 
Rank : 25/638
I’ve never taken a regular class unless there was no Honors option.
Total 6 APs : AP Spanish (5) AP English (4),AP Statistics (1) Senior Year : AP Lit, AP Biology, AP Studio Art : 2-D Design
Sustainable Ag Major
Big Brothers Big Sisters, 11-12, 64 hours ( 2hrs per week )
Youth Commission, 11-12 ( Treasurer, senior year ) 48.6 hours
Art Club, 10-12 ( Secretary, senior year )
Honors Society, 12 ( Mentored underclassmen ) 26 hours
UC Scholars 11-12
AVID 9-12
Awards : -Student Speaker Contest, 1st Place ( Club Level )
-3rd Place Chalk Art Contest ( school )
-(long name)… Merit Award ( I was nominated by my AP and Honors teachers for a regional scholarship. it was a big deal, the Principal himself drove me to the place where we were honored… hehe )
-Award for doing really well on my mock interview ( irrelevant but I was interviewed by a guy who’s wife went to UC Davis )
-Student Recognition Award ( Nominated by my Physics teacher for Student of the Year for being all positive and whatnot )
1st personal statement, People tell me it was really good. It was about how me and my family are kind of emotionally distant, especially my dad, but they still indirectly supported me and indirectly played a major role in shaping my passion for the environment…
2nd personal statement. I didn’t get this one edited or reviewed at all. Its meh. Just shows that I care enough about my heritage to improve my Spanish so I can interpret for my family, learn Mexican history by reading in Spanish and learn about current events 
( My counselor thought this was really interesting )