Chance, please? (Rice, Emory, WUSTL, GA Tech)

<p>So I'm definitely avoiding another college essay right now...</p>

<p>Personal Info:
-Private School
-Asian Female</p>

<p>GPA: 4.67 (weighted) 4.0 (unweighted)</p>

<p>Rank: 1/252</p>

<p>Courseload: 9th:4 honors 10th:5 honors 11th:4 honors+ 1 AP 12th:3 AP + 2 honors</p>

<p>ACT: 32 (Eng:34, Math:31, Reading:33, Science:31) <--ehh</p>

<p>SAT: 2040 (Math:690, Reading:680, Writing:670) <--not too hot</p>

<p>Honors/Awards: Principal’s Honor Roll (9, 10, 11)
Highest GPA in Physical Science Honors (9)
Excellence in English I Honors (9)
Scholar Athlete (9, 10, 11)
CBU Math Competition (9, 10, 11)
2nd in Geometry at CBU Math Competition (9)
Best Midfielder – Soccer (10)
Highest GPA in Pre-Calculus Honors (11)
Best Defender - Soccer (12)
TSSAA Division 2 "AA"- All West Region Team - Soccer (12)</p>

<p>APs: 11th:APUSH (3) 12th:AP Calc, AP Lit, AP Span <--weak</p>

<p>Extracurriculars: Varsity Soccer (4 years)
Mu Alpha Theta (3 years, current Pres)
National Honor Society (2 years, Humanitarian Committeee Co-Chair)
Spanish National Honor Society (2 years, curren Secretary)
Medical Club (1 yr, Co-chair)
Class Officers (1 yr, Senior Chaplain)
Teens for Life (1 yr, going on Pro-life trip later)
Competitive Soccer Team (4 years)
Key Club (2 yrs)</p>

<p>Teacher/Counselor Recs: Teachers probably good-really good, I hope for the best with my counselor...</p>

<p>Common App Essay: wrote about soccer, how it's a team and individual sacrifice, and related it to next year in college</p>

<p>Oh yeah, one uncle and aunt went to Rice, and my cuz currently goes to WUSTL.</p>

<p>Please chance me! Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>Okay just general comments, your essay is cliche, that’s kind of one of the do not write about topics like camp and death. However i haevnt read you essay so if you some how expanded beyond the obvious fact that when you play soccer you’re on a team and that it requires time, you’ll be fine. Your SATs are there the ACTs are better. I think you legacy at Rice will help a lot so i say you’ll get in, WUSTL probs in, Emory in, GA Tech idk much about</p>

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<p>Rice - most likely in
emory in
Gatech in</p>

<p>yeah, my essay isn’t actually on sacrifice as in time, more of like the breakdown of the game, but it’s hard to describe on here hah. thanks!!</p>