<p>I'm a white kid going to a highly selective HS in NYC (Jesuit)</p>
<p>GPA
UW: 3.71
W:4.01
SAT
Composite- 2020
Critical Reading- 700
Writing- 650
Math- 670
EC's
Class President and Treasurer
Officer or higher in
Office Club
Bio Marine
Latin Club
Business Club
Irish Club
Sports
4 years at football, track and baseball</p>
<p>Hook: Low family income in an extremely wealthy area
Dad's an alcoholic
ALOT of family friend went to ND (Dream)
Dad's business partner's wife is in admissions at ND </p>
<p>Dream:
Notre Dame
USC
BC
Target:
Penn State
South Carolina
Bentley
Tulane
Wake
Safety
Miami
Tulane
I'll add more colleges probably
!!!!</p>
<p>You don’t really have any hooks and I’m sorry about your dad. Tulane is listed twice and definitely not a safety-- either is Miami. I think your “dream” schools are somewhat realisti-- probably low to mid-reaches.</p>
<p>haha thanks and ya tried to change that earlier I had a much nicer resume but it got deleted. One more question, should I go with ED Or RD? And by low reach is that a good reach or a bad reach? sorry I’m new</p>
<p>Not sure what schools you are referring to applying ED or RD. None of your top 3 “dream” schools offer ED. ND and BC have EA but I believe those deadlines may have already passed. I would advise you to add a couple in-state public schools to your list, in case you don’t get the kind of financial aid that you are hoping for. I’m also not quite sure why you have out-of-state publics on your list due to the high OOS tuition they charge.</p>