Check my UC Prompt 1 essay please...

<p>Hello, I am new on this site... I need help with my UC Personal Statement #1. Can someone check my essay to see if it's okay, please.</p>

<p>just pm me!</p>

<p>pm me…</p>

<p>pm me…</p>

<p>I’ll read it too!!! PM me… </p>

<p>There are also a lot of sites with professional editors who can edit your essay and give feedback and what not… </p>

<p>I used BerkeleyEdit.com and I was really happy with the service and what I got back…</p>