Check the content of my Common App essay please! (merry christmas)

<p>Did option 1 on the Common App...</p>

<p>Need editing regarding the content/structure...</p>

<p>Hoping for EA/EDers or Current College students please!</p>

<p>Anyone? :)</p>

<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

<p>please please could someone read this ASAP? It’s a final draft, and I just want general impressions e.g. where I could improve/elaborate on. Grammatical corrections not as important as of now</p>

<p>Thanks!!! (Seniors or above thanks)</p>

<p>I’ll look it over if you want. :slight_smile: I’m a senior also applying to colleges, but I’m almost done with my Common App essay and it deals with a very unique experience.</p>